dear john
this letter is because I need a horse.
Ineed a horse because i lost my horse and i want to know if you have another one or you have a friend who has another one forme .I need ahorse only for seven days and i´ll pay 2000 dolars for this seven days .I found my horse in a forest the 20 of may ,I need the horse for the 21 of june if you found please geav my , i need a lot or if you have a friend to sell me a hourse i need for de 21 of june the race is in canada
you sincerely sir robert
You started the letter informally. There is a paragraph missing. You have punctuation mistakes. Be careful next time.
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